Saturday, 13 March 2010

Feedback for Hannah Tabor

Hannah Tabor

A good start Hannah – well done. You are on the right lines so don’t worry. You need to avoid writing this like an essay though. Use bullet points under subheadings instead of full sentences.
Good use of powerpoint of folk artists – perhaps make sure you say what things they ll have in common – conventions.
Good use of videos to demonstrate music video genre conventions.
Good use of key stills from your video too.

Continue like this. Use diagrams to explain theories/conventions. Use sub-headings and bullet points. You can record yourself talking to camera, like a director’s commentary if you’d like to. Have confidence Hannah, you are doing it right!

Mrs A

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